FINISHED RECRUITING VIDEO

Ok i made a new thread, so peeps would take notice lol. I have made a few changes. sorted any writing mistakes.Changed the writing style. The vid is now 30 ish seconds longer. I have changed the middle bfbc2 scene, also i have extended the time the writing stays on the screen. Some other differences too.
Its taken about 20 odd hours so i hope you like it in 1080P

Wow...!

Different vids, more clips and more text...

I think that's there is enough there and hopefully its inspiring enough to put the icing on our message. But yeah this is what we need, is when we make a recruitment posts / threads that we can back it up with some work - pictures say more and its easier to take in.

I think it gets the point across.

As regards to your work on this Next Gen - a Great thanks from the team really..!

And I loved the trick you did with the text, rolling on and off the screen - nice touch.

WELLDONE MAN..!



Thankyou



major

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K Thanks, Its pretty mad really, over the 3 versions i made you could see how each one worked better, running smoother, better tex ect. Only had the software a week ago, its completly different to my last program. Got there in the end though.

Oh No,

Just spotted one typo..

The link should be:
https://7thbarrier.forumotion.com

Will it matter - we got players e-mails...?

mc
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oh what a stupid mistake, i wil sort it.

I have sorted it already. its uploading now. Should take about 2 hours

Ah that would be why it is in private mode

Yeh just shut it down lol

NEW VID COMING SOON LOL

Hate to be a twat, but you spelt professionalism wrong

professionalism YEP I NOTICED TOO WAS ALREADY EDITING IT LOL

My Typo me thinks boys...

Had a bizzy week and the weekend is just starting, so sometimes I tend to iss things, especially if My eyes are still welded together with sleep... lol

Im off to catche some zerious Z's...zzZzzZzzzZZz


maj
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K lads take a look hopefully this will be ok. This version has the writen tread as well. it will be in full hd when its prosesed on you tube

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Well with good cool & inspiring music you can pull it off...

But seriously after reading all that text again under fast food - even I found it hard.

So I think we could comdense it into smaller easier to read segments with small spaces in between..? This interlaced with clips or inspring text tricks? It could be very useful - by setting the stage before they watch the goodies...?

I know this, the guy who wrote that should be shot..! lolz


tut tut tutsy

maj



PS: Or we should advise readers to be ready on their "PAUSE" buttons , - clickity click..!!!! >>> has Cannon used to say.

could say to pause, and also instead of the blue screen use a 7th Barrier pic can slow tex down more but it also adds lengh to the vid

Lik the video bro, it looks better than the other 1 i seen.

euh it's :evilcartman52@hotmail.com or maybe better:evilcartman@home.nl

but still your vid rocks.

Thats all good can be sorted, no probs. Before we use the vid the script at begining will be changed, plus i have somit else to add, shh! lol i have saved the vid in sections, sentences save separate so i can put it together and edit nearly every part of it.

Yeah I noticed some typos too.

I got tomorrow afternoon free - just let me know what you want and PM me. kk

thx

major

nice one so far next gen! if i can help u out with something..

Hardest wrote:

nice one so far next gen! if i can help u out with something..

yeh defo mate, It says finished vid, but it is not. Need some sort of slide show with still pics behind the thread at begining, think maybe from the current and future games the clan are and will be playing. (or past games?) need a SB pic or logo, new thread wrote, Could be good if all members names and ranks were on it somewhere. These are things i would like to add. i have already started re-editing, as this will hopefully be the last one it will take a bit more time (to get it spot on) if you have any ideas or can help with any off this it would be great bud.

Well this is the logo we have been using recently on GB:

Don't mean to be fickle, but the script needs some work, there are a few typos and grammatical errors (no offence, i know english isnt the first language for many on here).

I think it needs to have someone look over it. I'll do it if you send me the actual script.

Cheers

pickshinol wrote:

Don't mean to be fickle, but the script needs some work, there are a few typos and grammatical errors (no offence, i know english isnt the first language for many on here).

I think it needs to have someone look over it. I'll do it if you send me the actual script.

Cheers

Well thats because although the title has got finished vid, it does not say the script is finished only the gaming vid is finished. As the scriped was added just to see how it worked and what we could use, The scriped i used was from Major census. As we said all along we are open to suggestion, So if you have any feel free to let us know.

Finlay wrote:

Well this is the logo we have been using recently on GB:

YEH THAT COULD WORK BUD THANKS.

we never really sticked to 1 logo or something like that .. there are probably 100 different things with our name on it that could be our trademark

K fair enough. I should try and keep up in future.

Next Generation wrote:

pickshinol wrote:

Don't mean to be fickle, but the script needs some work, there are a few typos and grammatical errors (no offence, i know english isnt the first language for many on here).

I think it needs to have someone look over it. I'll do it if you send me the actual script.

Cheers

Well thats because although the title has got finished vid, it does not say the script is finished only the gaming vid is finished. As the scriped was added just to see how it worked and what we could use, The scriped i used was from Major census. As we said all along we are open to suggestion, So if you have any feel free to let us know.

pickshinol wrote:

K fair enough. I should try and keep up in future.

Next Generation wrote:

pickshinol wrote:

Don't mean to be fickle, but the script needs some work, there are a few typos and grammatical errors (no offence, i know english isnt the first language for many on here).

I think it needs to have someone look over it. I'll do it if you send me the actual script.

Cheers

Well thats because although the title has got finished vid, it does not say the script is finished only the gaming vid is finished. As the scriped was added just to see how it worked and what we could use, The scriped i used was from Major census. As we said all along we are open to suggestion, So if you have any feel free to let us know.

No worrys mate, its got finished vid should off named it somit else, my bad.

Hardest wrote:

we never really sticked to 1 logo or something like that .. there are probably 100 different things with our name on it that could be our trademark

Could i leave it to you to find a logo or wallpaper, Its for the script to role over at the begining instead of the blue background.. need a good recruiting script who would be best to do this?
ALSO is every 1 happy with the main vid with the quotes on? i have taken the middle pause out were it says professionalizm, so it just continues. Plus added some BURN fadeouts.

I'll use and borrow some part of the text, scrink it down and post it up, we can get some feedback on that too. Cant have it too long, or too much in one paragraph - otherwise its too much to read at once. Short, simple and sweet..!

Im bizzy o house today and family coming over - so I will try but cant promise today precisesly. so if you can tie up any other lose ends, PM info with Hardest or other team mebers. Then thats good to get the ball going and get this thing trimmed and ready to go...


maj